A nice edit on the whole. I think you need to have a think about the titles though. With each individual letter coming on the screen, it is easy to focus on that rather than on the footage at times. For the final edit, you will need to think about motion tracking and what you can pin the text to. You might want to re-shoot a few bits and add in a pull focus for example. The music was powerful - where did you take your inspiration from for the music and will you add any sound effects into the final piece. You also need to think about the fact that some of the scenes appear quite dark, in particular the one where the boys are on the floor.
If you can come and see me, I can talk you through it frame by frame. A good effort though.
A nice edit on the whole. I think you need to have a think about the titles though. With each individual letter coming on the screen, it is easy to focus on that rather than on the footage at times. For the final edit, you will need to think about motion tracking and what you can pin the text to. You might want to re-shoot a few bits and add in a pull focus for example. The music was powerful - where did you take your inspiration from for the music and will you add any sound effects into the final piece. You also need to think about the fact that some of the scenes appear quite dark, in particular the one where the boys are on the floor.
ReplyDeleteIf you can come and see me, I can talk you through it frame by frame. A good effort though.